We are back with the second half of this blast of a Blogfest with our Hangers this time. The last sentence of each chapter is just as important as the first. Check out my Hangers; the last lines of each chapter of my WIP – I’m Coming Home.
- So much for 36 hours to herself.
- And, she was pretty proud of herself, too.
- She didn’t remember reading it before falling asleep, but she must have because she dreamed about him all night.
- That was Sydney’s heart talking, her head was singing an entirely different tune.
- She decided that it was probably just the alcohol; liquid courage.
- From the way he kissed her good night, she had no doubt that he felt the same.
- The rest of the day was pretty uneventful.
- After the first song, Sydney was having such a great time all the negative, bad, anxiety fueled stuff in her head pretty much disappeared.
- “By the way, my nature is not all that delicate.”
I like my hangers. They convey the series of emotions that my MC pretty well. Let me know what you think.
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I especially like the first one and the last one.
Thanks so much Jeannette. I really like the first one, too.
I’m curious what she read that caused her to dream about the guy. 🙂
Hi Stina. MC and her new guy were having a text conversation before going to bed and he sent one last text that she didn’t remember reading. As to what it said, have to wait for that one. 😉
Great work! I liked the last one the best! 😀
Hi Kyra. That seems to be the popular line. I love it, too. Thanks so much.
My favourite is:“By the way, my nature is not all that delicate.” But they’re all good, actually 🙂
Thanks Em, see my reply to Emily’s comment above. I love this line. MC is on her way to gaining some confidence.
“By the way, my nature is not all that delicate.”
Solid voice! Combined with the others, I really got a feel for your character.
Thanks Emily. That was one of those lines that I thought of one day and actually worked it into the story because I thought it was a great line. I love dialogue/quote. It is my favorite thing to write and this was a great end to a fun conversation between the MC and her new man.
There’s some intriguing lines here, the first and last ones being stand out lines.
I do like the last line. Thanks so much Martin.
I like the second one, it makes me ask questions 🙂
That was a moment where she was thinking, ok, thing are going to be ok, but then the ball drops again. False sense of confidence is a good plot tool. haha.
Okay, I get that these are hangers, but dang it! Now you’ve gone and left us hanging. This is way too much fun. We need the rest of the chapters… 😉
Hi Tameri, Thanks so much. Nothing wrong with a little tease. All I am doing is soliciting praise to boost my confidence. Baby steps.
So good! I’m thinking #4 might be my favorite 🙂
Thanks Hope. #4 is a good one. It’s the classic head/heart conflict. Running all throughout this story.
I liked all of them but the last one is AWESOME! Thank you for hanging with us. (Okay, I know that’s lame but I was trying to get create.)
Hey Jenny. It made me laugh. Thanks so much.
Great hangers! I LOVE the forth one and the last one. They definitely make me want to read on 🙂
Thanks Amanda. I appreciate the LOVE. 🙂
These are great! I like the last one the best.
Thanks Lisa.
Ha! I like the last one best. 🙂
Thanks so much Rachel. I do, too. 🙂
I kind of like this one:
“By the way, my nature is not all that delicate.”
’cause I have had to intimate as much to people about myself before 😉 For some reason I used to have a reputation for being a bit of a goody two shoes. Have no idea where that came from, but mostly it’s been cleared up now 😛
I had that same problem. I am still trying to set the record straight, but people seem to like to think of me as a good girl. haha.
Awesome! I’m a sucker for kissing ones 🙂 So I liked that one the best 😀
Thanks. With the MS, I had to create several way to describe kissing. Lots of kissing in this book.
Sorry to be so late in posting. but I’m just now finishing up all the entries! My favorite hanger is, “That was Sydney’s heart talking, her head was singing an entirely different tune.” Sounds like a great character with a good voice. I would love to read this story:)
Thanks Talynn.
This one is great! ‘She didn’t remember reading it before falling asleep, but she must have because she dreamed about him all night.
It’s at times when I read things like this that I wish I remembered my dreams…
Hey Kelley. Thanks. I remember a lot of my dreams, but usually the bad ones.