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F – Flag Pole Hill

Published on by Sydney Aaliyah Michelle6 Comments

a-to-z-letters-fFlag Pole Hill is a cool little park my friends and I hung out at when we couldn’t think of anything better to do.  I never knew until I got older the history behind the area. The park was built in the 1930’s and is still the highest point in Dallas. Kind of cool to think people were hanging out with friends and having picnics in the same my friends and I hung out 80 years before.

 

“Mich, did you hear?”
“Hear what?” 
“Stop eating and listen to me.” 
“Ok, what?” 
“You’re never going to believe it.” 
“You’re probably right. Hey, give me that back.”  
“I will, after you hear the good news.” 
“Ok, what’s the good news.” 
“We got a gig.”
“Oh my god, that’s awesome. You deserve a hug.” 
“Thank  you very much.” 
“Where’s the gig?” 
“I can’t believe it, it’s finally happening. I knew it was only a matter of time.” 
“I’m so proud of you.” 
“Me, too.” 
“Where’s the gig?” 
“You know, you’ve always believed in me.”
“Aw, I love you. Of course I believe in you.” 
“I love you, too.” 
“Where’s the gig?” 
“I can’t wait to see you on the front row. Wear something sexy.” 
“I will, but where’s the gig?”
“And, after the gig, we’ll go out and celebrity.” 
“Definitely, but Jeff, where’s the gig?” 
“Flag Poll Hill.” 
“Flag Poll Hill.” 
“Yeah, Flag Poll Hill.” 
“The park, where we hang out all the time and where you’ve played countless times. That’s your gig?” 
“Yeah.” 
“Who hired you?” 
“Mike.” 
“Mike?” 
“Yes, Mike. Stop repeating everything I say.” 
“Your best friend, Mike?” 
“Yes, what happen to supportive?” 
“What did he hire you to play for?” 
“His birthday party.” 
“The birthday party we planned?”
“Why are you looking at me like that?” 
“Well, is he paying you?” 
“Paying me, he’s my best friend. I can’t charge him.” 
“So, let me get this straight.  Your first gig is playing at a park we hang out at all the time for a party  that we planned for your best friend for free.” 
“Yeah, ain’t it great.” 
“You’re so pretty.”

It’s still one of my favorite places in Dallas.  Do you have any hangouts that have lasted since high school? 

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Progressive Book Club – Bird by Bird Top 10 List

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Welcome to the first discussion post of the Progressive Book Club, hosted by M.L. Swift.  This month’s selection, Bird by Bird written by Anne Lamott.I really enjoyed the book. It was funny and entertaining. I forgot it was supposed to be educational.

 What I took away from this book was a deeper understanding of why I love to write.  It reminded me, although being a writer can be frustrating and isolating and at times boring, there is nothing like the physical, mental, emotional and spiritual feeling  you get from writing.

Here are the top 10 lessons I learned from Bird by Bird by Anne Lamott:

  1. Writing and reading decrease our sense of isolation.  They deepen and widen and expand our sense of life. – It gave me a life.
  2. Do it every day for a while. – I struggle with this the most.
  3. The actual act of writing turns out to be the best part. – If I could remember how it feels all the time, I would no longer have a problem with #2.
  4. When my writer friends are working, they feel better and more alive than they do at any other time. – Again, that physical, emotional, mental & spiritual things I talked about before. 
  5. You get your confidence and intuition back by trusting yourself, by being militantly on your own side. – Writing taught me who I am and who I am, is ok. 
  6. Write an incredibly shitty, self-indulgent, whinny, mewling first draft.  Then take out as many of the excesses as you can. – Turning off and the edit button is hard and even harder to turn it back on. 
  7. Characters: it takes time for you to know them, you need to find out as much as possible about the interior life of the people you are working with, you are going to hate some of your characters, you are probably going to have to let bad things happen to some of the characters you love, plot grows out of character, the better you know them the more you’ll see things from their point of view, you have to get things quiet in your head so you can hear them and let them guide your story. – My favorite section of the book. I love the purposeful task of creating a good character. 
  8. The development of relationships creates plot. – You create some much for the reader if you focus on the relationships in your WIP. 
  9. Dialogue: listening, observing, storing things away, making your isolation pay off, each one must sound different, gives us the sense that we are eavesdropping, is the way to nail character. – Eavesdropping is the key.
  10. Jealousy is the business of comparing my insides to other people’s outsides. – I put this one on my inspiration board. It is so true.  Not a fair comparison, so stop doing it. 

Which piece of advice do you identify with most?